Who By Fire, Scene 32/46 Plan, Outline Card for End of the Cautionary Tale Subplot

      Sorry for this very short post, but there was practically nothing on this particular scene card.  This scene was going to be a disaster, but the plan was even worse, so the drafting never happened.  Still, it might make a good sub plot in other hands, but not mine.

Who By Fire rough draft,  mostly written in ’20:

       

                                                                            scene 32/46 (Minnie5/5)

Purpose:MinnieEndFallsIntoAbyss; StoryPart:AlmstEndActII

setting: time, wayAfterKillerStorm18Aug KillerStormMdptScn New Info: …

Major Trauma: sees wht abused altar boy abusng smaller slave he knows

I. hears through Minnie’s pov: her envy led her to cause, Major Trauma: white abused altar boy abusing… & gets news: Josaias arrived in Baltimore early fr Annapolis to get J.

drop last clue to her btryl, manip by elementals/Angelos, successful in getting lucy sold south by telling JPM abt I.’s saved money, buyer, love for lucy, & plan to take J. north.

(all find out she admits? That she’s been giving more & wrse info to JPM for ‘bribes’ & imagined herself closer to gett/winning I.) ; admits to swapping I.’s knife for a poison in loom false drawer;

End: all reject Minnie. She’s ftally miserable/dead to all/dead?

*** (end of scene 32/46, Minnie5)

***end of  Scene from very Rough Draft , Who By Fire 

Not entirely sure whether these scene cards were already posted, but they are also quite pertinent to this scene: w32m15of30 

Shira

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