Sorry for this very short post, but there was practically nothing on this particular scene card. This scene was going to be a disaster, but the plan was even worse, so the drafting never happened. Still, it might make a good sub plot in other hands, but not mine.
Who By Fire rough draft, mostly written in ’20:
scene 32/46 (Minnie5/5)
Purpose:MinnieEndFallsIntoAbyss; StoryPart:AlmstEndActII
setting: time, wayAfterKillerStorm18Aug … New Info: …
–Major Trauma: sees wht abused altar boy abusng smaller slave he knows
–I. hears through Minnie’s pov: her envy led her to cause, Major Trauma: white abused altar boy abusing… & gets news: Josaias arrived in Baltimore early fr Annapolis to get J.
–drop last clue to her btryl, manip by elementals/Angelos, successful in getting lucy sold south by telling JPM abt I.’s saved money, buyer, love for lucy, & plan to take J. north.
(all find out she admits? That she’s been giving more & wrse info to JPM for ‘bribes’ & imagined herself closer to gett/winning I.) ; admits to swapping I.’s knife for a poison in loom false drawer;
End: all reject Minnie. She’s ftally miserable/dead to all/dead?
*** (end of scene 32/46, Minnie5)
***end of Scene from very Rough Draft , Who By Fire
Not entirely sure whether these scene cards were already posted, but they are also quite pertinent to this scene:
Shira
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