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Novel as Not Even Thinly Veiled Autobiography??

    Probably not a good idea, at least so all of the writing experts tell us.  But why, or why not?  I’ve heard it quoted that ‘all novels are autobiographical,’ which makes sense given that any and every line one writes tells much about the writer, no matter what that writer’s intention may have been.  Every word you write reveals something about you.  But you never have a chance to explain or give your own interpretation to your writing.  Once it is out in the world, readers will see in your writing what they wish to see.  Even if it is a true event which they would prefer (and you would also have preferred, for that matter) were not true, or a time when you wondered if you yourself might not be some alien artifact merely sent here to record these odd human goings-on, or if you always thought that life might be some gross diabolical experiment, or maybe even just a fun bet, between two or more un-empathetic beings or species.  Every word your write will pass through the filter of each and every person who reads those words, and thus be judged according to someone else’s experiences and ways of thinking.  From a light-skinned Black child being taunted as ‘white’ by other Black kids, painful for that child, but reduced to whining angst by others, to the fear of a woman that she might be seen as dating across races being turned into mere criticism of interracial dating or marriage.  Our experiences and the thoughts and feelings within those events are always subject to interpretation, measurement, being weighed in the balance, and found wanting by others who have not experienced those or similar things.  The feeling of lost opportunities when potential and ought-to-have-been alliances turn out to be physical aggressions of the first order, all downgraded to a mere fight.  The feeling, when told to take care because your skin is just the right color to get you excluded from every group you have ever even heard of, judged to be simple self-pity.  Your desire to explain that not a single human being ever born has a “pure” bloodline, wiped out by those who simply want you to suffer because you are a convenient target, when they are in fact, acting in precise accord with the racists from the other side who also agree that “the races don’t mix.”  The irony and the agony of being a human being, when it is all so clearly an exercise in futility, just as the writer of Kohelet, aka  Ecclesiastes,  said so long ago:  “הבל” /  “emptiness” -it may all really be emptiness, but we must keep trying, anyway.

Shira

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Learning through TV or Film story:

                                                   Babylon5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli Annem,  Lupin,  La Casa de Papel/Money Heist, or El Ministerio del Tiempo Reviews

or

Learning in the obvious way: Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

     Thoughtful Reading Writers, please consider reading and then also writing something about #ProjectDoBetter.    Phase I includes freely sharing with others about how consumer debt  statutes-of-limitations   related Statutes of Limitations are meant to protect society, if only everyone knew about them.  The work is still heavy, and the workers are still few.   But we human beings  can still seriously Do Better.  cropped-dobettercover.jpg

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

aka:

ShiraDest  (and by the way, I have written several narratives about these incidents mentioned above, if anyone wants me to link in to them either by editing this post, or in the comments to this post later…  Just let me know in a comment here.)

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Writing Process Wednesdays, and How Ancestry Spurred a Novel  

      So I kept feeling bothered by my family history, as if I were annoying some ancestors that wanted to be remembered, in some way.  I think about what Toni Morrison said about the work of a Black woman who writes as being to “bear witness” to what has been suppressed, and of all the stories that have gone untold, those of the “Fancy Maids”, the Quadroons and other light skinned women, have been ignored the most, as with the reaction to Louisa and her mother H. Jacobs narration of Incidents in The Life of a Slave Girl (review coming next week…), which was long said to have been fiction before finally being accepted as truth.

     In the first few weeks of starting to plan Who By Fire, I tried to write up some plot points in the two or three days after thinking of the idea.  I kept trying to force a female protagonist into the role, but kept coming back to a male protag.   I decided that I had the entire story plotted and still couldn’t stop thinking about it, so it was time to name my protag.  I spent a day or two mulling it over until suddenly the idea of a runaway slave from MD fit, and the G’town slaves sold off in 1838 immediately made it all fit together.

  He had to be the one who got away.

     I still shudder with horror at the thought of what may have to happen to our story’s Fancy, Lucy, before the end: FancyQuadroonNYMet  Horrifyingly enough, even I., our hero, himself, could also be treated as Fancies under the worst of circumstances.

But, at last, this novel in progress, Who By Fire, finally seems to be coming together, but  whobyfireiwilltmpcover

  While my research on The Fancy Trade for this novel project, which I paused to write a nonfiction book, and restarted, centered on that of women, boys were also obviously available as part of this trade.

I had a dream about this topic, one that was just a bit too personal, frankly, as some ancestor seemed to find it necessary to put me directly into the skin of a Fancy Maid, in this dream, and I felt compelled to write a short short about it, which accidentally turned into the series Ann & Anna (referenced in the .sig at the end of this post…).  I will admit that I knew the history and the locations behind this short short that turned into a serial series well in advance, which is probably why I was having a nightmare related to the topic: BchrFancySaleBigger      Ann and Anna was so easy to write that I still keep asking  myself  what is  so blooming difficult about this project,  Who By Fire, and then I keep remembering  that I already knew everything about the Ann and Anna series, because I was using a historical personage with a recorded itinerary, and adding another main character whose voice I knew extraordinarily well, partly based on all of the Victorian era novels I read or listen to because they are available for free, now being in the Public Domain.

Thank you again, Project Gutenberg and Librivox.org!!

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Share your thoughts, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

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Click here to read, if you like:

B5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin, or La Casa de Papel/Money Heist Reviews

Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Thoughtful Readers, please consider reading about #ProjectDoBetter.  This novel is my personal way (as opposed to founding the Project, overall) of contributing to building tools that can help increase empathy and compassion in our world.  Story, as part of how we see our world, helps us make sense of and define our actions in this world.  And remember how important story is also as part of this project. Let’s Do Better.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

ShiraDest

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Writing Process Wednesdays, and A SubPlot via Unreliable Narrator  

      So it turns out that using a small child to narrate, almost by definition an unreliable one,  in a subplot that tells the story of a false protagonist, is a bit more complicated than I had realized it would be.

     I still have very little idea of what this boy looks like, aside from his being very light skinned, and having short curly (what they call “corkicelli” in the Curly Girl book I read some years ago…) hair, could be sold as what they used to call a Fancy (based on the fancy trade…).

Not good.

But he is too young to know that, yet.  He is the son of Lucy:  FancyQuadroonNYMet  and I., both of whom could be treated as Fancies under the worst of circumstances.

But, at last, this novel in progress, Who By Fire, finally seems to be coming together, but  

it is still a huge chore.  Also, having used far too many pieces of tiny bits of paper, I am referring back to my initial story Spine (yes, borrowed from the Pixar story spine, before I realized that that spine works better for a short story than for a novel, at least for me…) idea sketched out in the large:  PlotOutlineTensionLvls  , and to my online research notes, and even to old blog posts about my research  for this novel project, which I paused to write a nonfiction book, and restarted!

I  wish that I had done less planning for this one, as I did absolutely no planning for the series (which I’d only intended to be one short short, written after a dream I had during the research phase for this book, in face!) Ann & Anna (referenced in the .sig at the end of this post…).  I will admit that I knew the history and the locations behind this short short that turned into a serial series well in advance, which is probably why I was having a nightmare related to the topic: BchrFancySaleBigger (Ann and Anna) was so easy to write that I still keep asking  myself  what is  so blooming difficult about this project,  Who By Fire, and then I keep remembering  that I already knew everything about the Ann and Anna series, because I was using a historical personage with a recorded itinerary, and adding another main character whose voice I knew extraordinarily well, partly based on all of the Victorian era novels I read or listen to because they are available for free, now being in the Public Domain.

Thank you again, Project Gutenberg and Librivox.org!!

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Share your thoughts, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

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Click here to read, if you like:

B5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin, or La Casa de Papel/Money Heist Reviews

Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Thoughtful Readers, please consider reading about #ProjectDoBetter.  This novel is my personal way (as opposed to founding the Project, overall) of contributing to building tools that can help increase empathy and compassion in our world.  Story, as part of how we see our world, helps us make sense of and define our actions in this world.  And remember how important story is also as part of this project. Let’s Do Better.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

ShiraDest

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Mental Health Care In The Breach?

      This poem hearkens back to the Brolly Lady Standing in The Gap narrative, linked below the current poem upon which the phrase is based,  (which true life narrative was incorrectly listed as a fiction story in the e-zine that published Brolly Lady last year, but still has not responded to my correction email…) standing in that lonely gap:

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Who will walk with me?

In light, in truth

through blind alleys,

down the dark paths.

Exploring the depths,

plumbing our hearts.

Going forward through fear,

to stand in the gap.

For

someone must stand,

sacrifice, perhaps.

Even rush in,

where angels fear to tred.

Where

is the woman of valor,

courageous and kind,

to stand with me?

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   I think it still needs a bit of editing, so I can do a little better on this one.  Can’t we all Do Better, for each other?  Can’t we all stand together in the gap?
 cropped-dobettercover.jpg   Phase II,  especially, of Project Do Better, looks to the arts to help us all build connections, tools, and a kinder, safer, more compassionate world.
Let’s Do Better, please, for all of our sake, please.

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Dear Readers, share your thoughts on how this poem may (or may not) contribute to the work of building a kinder and safer world for all of us, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

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Learning through story:

                                                   Babylon5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin,  La Casa de Papel/Money Heist, or El Ministerio del Tiempo Reviews

Learning via Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Thoughtful Readers, please consider sharing in the work of #ProjectDoBetter.  This poem is one more way in which writing can contribute to building a more honest, kinder, safer, and ultimately more compassionate world that actually works for all of us.

Please.

Let’s Do Better.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

S. Dest, aka simply Shira,

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Writing Process Wednesdays, and The SubPlot Journal  

     So, I can confirm, then, that keeping a character journal can be helpful, but  my character journals would have been far more helpful if not on small bits of scrap paper.  Lucy’s character FancyQuadroonNYMet    arc interacted with the character arc of her husband, our hero Isaias, from a distance, so it was tricky to show why and how both of them were evolving in their thinking and ways of doing things, and why, when they were reacting to words spoken three years prior to this story timeline.

But, at last, this novel in progress, Who By Fire, finally seems to be coming together, but  whobyfireiwilltmpcover

it is still a huge chore.  Also, having used far too many pieces of tiny bits of paper, I am referring back to my initial story Spine (yes, borrowed from the Pixar story spine, before I realized that that spine works better for a short story than for a novel, at least for me…) idea sketched out in the large:    , and to my online research notes, and even to old blog posts about my research  for this novel project, which I paused to write a nonfiction book, and restarted

I  wish that I had done less planning for this one, as I did absolutely no planning for the series (which I’d only intended to be one short short, written after a dream I had during the research phase for this book, in face!) Ann & Anna (referenced in the .sig at the end of this post…).  I will admit that I knew the history and the locations behind this short short that turned into a serial series well in advance, which is probably why I was having a nightmare related to the topic: BchrFancySaleBigger (Ann and Anna) was so easy to write that I still keep asking  myself  what is  so blooming difficult about this project,  Who By Fire, and then I keep remembering  that I already knew everything about the Ann and Anna series, because I was using a historical personage with a recorded itinerary, and adding another main character whose voice I knew extraordinarily well, partly based on all of the Victorian era novels I read or listen to because they are available for free, now being in the Public Domain. 

Thank you again, Project Gutenberg and Librivox.org!!

 

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Share your thoughts, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

*****************

Click here to read, if you like:

B5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin,  La Casa de Papel/Money Heist or El Ministerio del Tiempo Reviews

Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Thoughtful Readers, please consider sharing about #ProjectDoBetter.  This novel is my personal way (as opposed to founding the Project, overall) of contributing to building tools that can help increase empathy and compassion in our world.  Story, as part of how we see our world, helps us make sense of and define our actions in this world.  And remember how important story is also as part of this project. Let’s Do Better.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

 
 

ShiraDest

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Writing Process Wednesdays, and Finishing SubPlot(s)  

  So my novel journal has continued to be useful to me, although in a disconcerting way.   I am still finding bits of ideas that I had neglected to put into my outlines, and keep worrying that I’ve missed a scribbled note somewhere that could change the direction of an entire subplot.

So, I can confirm, then, that keeping a novel journal can be helpful.   I also can now confirm that outlining, in very high lvl detail, all of the scenes, including subplots, first, can give a set of logical places to ‘hang’ ideas for dialogue, excerpts, and character bible or backstory dribbles.  Drafting, for me at least, really needs to wait until I know the weather, location, and purpose of each and every scene, and the hows and whys of every character in that scene.  Otherwise I get stuck working on the outline and then go back to research, which is what I am most comfortable with, but I never get any work done on learning how my characters think and speak and act, without knowing what they are trying to get to in each set of scenes, first.  So, this journey has shown me that much.

At last.       This novel in progress, Who By Fire, finally seems to be coming together, but  whobyfireiwilltmpcover

it is still a huge chore.  Also, having used far too many pieces of tiny bits of paper, I am referring back to my initial story Spine (yes, borrowed from the Pixar story spine, before I realized that that spine works better for a short story than for a novel, at least for me…) idea sketched out in the large:  IMG_20221123_202029284  , and to my online research notes, and even to old blog posts about my research  for this novel project, which I paused to write a nonfiction book, and restarted

I  wish that I had done less planning for this one, as I did absolutely no planning for the series (which I’d only intended to be one short short, written after a dream I had during the research phase for this book, in face!) Ann & Anna (but I admit that I knew the history and the locations behind this short short that turned into a serial series well in advance, which is probably why I was having a nightmare related to the topic…): BchrFancySaleBigger (Ann and Anna) was so easy to write that I still keep asking  myself  what is  so blooming difficult about this project,  Who By Fire, and then I keep remembering  that I already knew everything about the Ann and Anna series, because I was using a historical personage with a recorded itinerary, and adding another main character whose voice I knew extraordinarily well, partly based on all of the Victorian era novels I read or listen to because they are available for free, now being in the Public Domain. 

Thank you again, Project Gutenberg and Librivox.org!!

 

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Share your thoughts, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

*****************

Click here to read, if you like:

B5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin, or La Casa de Papel/Money Heist Reviews

Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Thoughtful Readers, please consider reading about #ProjectDoBetter.  This novel is my personal way (as opposed to founding the Project, overall) of contributing to building tools that can help increase empathy and compassion in our world.  Story, as part of how we see our world, helps us make sense of and define our actions in this world.  And remember how important story is also as part of this project. Let’s Do Better.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

 
 

ShiraDest


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Writing Process Wednesdays, and Midpoint Plot(s) Convergence 

  So my novel journal has finally become useful to me!   I finally found bits of ideas in this bitty note of paper that I had neglected to put into my outlines.

So, I did find out, late in the process of writing this novel, that keeping a novel journal can be helpful.  At last.       whobyfireiwilltmpcover

Also, having used far too many pieces of tiny bits of paper, I am still drowning in paper and in online notes, and even in bookmarks stuck in my research books for this novel project that I paused to write a nonfiction book, and restarted!  I  wish that I had done less planning for this one, as I did absolutely no planning for the series (which I’d only intended to be one short short, written after a dream I had during the research phase for this book, in fact!) Ann & Anna (but I admit that I knew the history and the locations behind this short short that turned into a serial series well in advance, which is probably why I was having a nightmare related to the topic…): BchrFancySaleBigger (Ann and Anna) was so easy to write that I still keep asking  myself  what is  so blooming difficult about this project,  Who By Fire, and then I keep remembering  that I already knew everything about the Ann and Anna series, because I was using a historical personage with a recorded itinerary, and adding another main character whose voice I knew extraordinarily well, partly based on all of the Victorian era novels I read or listen to because they are available for free, now being in the Public Domain.  Thank you again, Project Gutenberg and Librivox.org!!

 

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Share your thoughts, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

*****************

Click here to read, if you like:

B5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin, or La Casa de Papel/Money Heist Reviews

Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Thoughtful Readers, please consider reading about #ProjectDoBetter.  This novel is my personal way (as opposed to founding the Project, overall) of contributing to building tools that can help increase empathy and compassion in our world.  Story, as part of how we see our world, helps us make sense of and define our actions in this world.  And remember how important story is also as part of this project. Let’s Do Better.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

 
 

ShiraDest

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Writing Process Wednesdays, and, Plot vs. Character

Well, now I know where I stand on that famous debate, even though I was trying hard not to take sides while I plotted out my novel as I thought I was also getting to know my characters at the same time.  Wrong.  I find, personally, that it takes writing some scenes and bits of dialogue over and over again for me to understand how each individual character feels, behaves, speaks, and changes over time.   

This makes planning out such a complex novel as Who By Fire much less simple than I had imagined, and I find that it seems to be, currently, beyond my writing skills.   I continue to work on honing my craft, of course, and to work on plotting out this novel, while remembering that it         whobyfireiwilltmpcover

comes based on all of my prior work.  Also, having the very positive experience of writing and getting surprisingly strong feedback both for this novel project idea that I developed from my family history research, and especially for my short short series (which I wrote completely off-the-cuff, and found both easy and pleasurable to write) more so but perhaps also with the help of the novel journaling process, in a different way than I had expected.  The series: BchrFancySaleBigger (Ann and Anna) was so easy, and even fun(!), to write that it now makes me wonder how on earth I can keep slogging my way through Who By Fire, which is proving to be so difficult for me at the moment.  Every time I think I know my protagonist, Isaias (whose name will later change…), he changes!  He still looks mostly the same, IsaiasPicPg sort of, but his way of thinking keeps changing on me, and I am having a very difficult time nailing down how he interacts with his two best friends (who were initially meant to be a mentor or advisor type, and a ‘particular friend’ as they used to say back then, or a best friend, who was also a rival for a love interest that has now turned into a cautionary tale subplot protagonist.  All of this with old scenes written that now need to be either altered or simply thrown away and rewritten altogether, which is hard to do, given that I am a person who values productivity and hates to see time and effort go to waste (yes, I know that that effort did not go to waste, but it feels like the time I spend writing initial scenes, voice journals, and novel journals, indeed are a waste of time since they do not end up directly in a publishable novel that I can immediately begin querying!!).   I think I am starting to realize that Who By Fire is currently biting off just a bit more than my writing skills to this point can chew, and I am itching to go back to Ann & Anna, make that series of posts into a prequel for a novel (especially since several people have called the series “#NovelWorthy” (which I had never heard of, many thanks, ladies) and just take off from there, if a novel based on an already blog-posted (and thus published, which I also did not realize back then serial can be shopped for publication?

 

Thoughts, Writing-Knowledgeable  Readers?

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Share your thoughts, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

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B5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin, or La Casa de Papel/Money Heist Reviews

Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Thoughtful Readers, please consider reading about #ProjectDoBetter.  This novel is my personal way (as opposed to founding the Project, overall) of contributing to building tools that can help increase empathy and compassion in our world.  Story, as part of how we see our world, helps us make sense of and define our actions in this world.  And remember how important story is also as part of this project. Let’s Do Better.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

 
 

ShiraDest


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Writing Process Wednesdays, Novel Journals, and Project Do Better

  So my novel journaling has been very topsy turvy.  That turned out to become a serious problem for me, once I began writing the scenes for the rough draft, and  remembered that I had left notes in a spreadsheet, and on paper, in different locations at random.  All of the writing advice insists on keeping a novel journal as you go through the writing process, but personally, at this point (and it has now been 2019-2022, three years, since I began jotting down ideas, excerpts, timelines, and research notes), for me, the novel journal is getting to be more of a hassle than a help, it seems.

Maybe I will find out, later on in the process of writing this novel, that it is helpful.  I hope, at any rate.       whobyfireiwilltmpcover

Also, having already tried to put too many subplot and scene notes in too many spreadsheets and online reminders, as well as on paper, I am drowning in paper and in online notes, and even in bookmarks stuck in my research books for this novel project that I paused to write a nonfiction book, and restarted!  I found that a short series that I wrote completely off-the-cuff actually helped me thinking about this novel, more so but perhaps also with the help of the novel journaling process, in a different way than I had expected.  The series: BchrFancySaleBigger (Ann and Anna, linked below…) was so easy to write that I found myself wondering what was so difficult about this project, and then I realized that I already knew everything about the series, because I was using a historical personage with a known itinerary, and adding a second protagonist with a history that I already knew intimately, since she was drawn from my own family history.  Not as a person that I found, but a person that I have been trying to find for many years.  But looking at the known history and tracking backward, it is clear that such a person, or persons, certainly existed in my family, sadly.

     Thoughtful Readers, please consider reading about #ProjectDoBetter.  This novel is my personal way (as opposed to founding the Project, overall) of contributing to building tools, through story, which is one of humanity’s most powerful tools,  that can help increase empathy and compassion in our world.  Story, as part of how we see our world, helps us make sense of and define our actions in this world.  And remember how important story is also as part of this project. Let’s Do Better.

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Share your thoughts, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

*****************

Click here to read, if you like:

B5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin, or La Casa de Papel/Money Heist Reviews

Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

ShiraDest

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Writing Process Wednesdays, and, Character Bibles and Subplots

  So my hero’s wife, Lucy FancyQuadroonNYMet  is trapped elsewhere, and thus has her own subplot, which I began to plan out before doing very much (if any) of her character bible or voice journal work.   

That turned out to become a serious problem for me, once I began writing the main plot scenes, and came along to her first subplot scene in       whobyfireiwilltmpcover

Also, having already tried to put too many subplot and scene notes in too many spreadsheets and online reminders, as well as on paper, I was sure that I had notes on her voice, and the reason I wanted to use first person present tense rather than my usual either first person third or third person third (aka storyteller ) for her voice! 

 

 

Shira

Action Items:

1.) Share your thoughts, please.

2.) Write a story, post or comment that uses those thoughts.

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Click here to read, if you like:

B5, Hakan: Muhafiz/The Protector, Sihirli AnnemLupin, or La Casa de Papel/Money Heist Reviews

Holistic College Algebra & GED/High School Lesson Plans,

Thoughtful Readers, please consider reading about #ProjectDoBetter.  This novel is my personal way (as opposed to founding the Project, overall) of contributing to building tools that can help increase empathy and compassion in our world.  Story, as part of how we see our world, helps us make sense of and define our actions in this world.  And remember how important story is also as part of this project. Let’s Do Better.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BSCS

 
 

ShiraDest

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