Writing Process: 6th Draft Edits Done, Beta Readers and Logo Needed!!

           At last!   The #ProjectDoBetter Manual is now published, and freely available to all.   I was in final proofs of the text of Draft  #6  of Project Do Better’s manifesto,  so let me know if you want to read this 6th Draft and I will post it!

     I look forward to hearing your opinions, Thoughtful Readers.

We can really  Do Better.



Action Prompts:

    Share your thoughts on how to build buy-in to create a more equal, or at least less inequitable, society, please.   Guest posts are always welcome.  Writing, by the way, is my personal contribution to Project Do Better

What would yours be, if you had time?


Click here to read, if you like:

B5, Hakan:Muhafiz/The Protector, Lupin, or La Casa De Papel/Money Heist Reviews,

Holistic College Algebra & GED/HiSET Night School Lesson Plans,

           or My Nonfiction  & Historical Fiction Serial Writing

Thoughtful Readers, please consider reading about #ProjectDoBetter.

Shira Destinie A. Jones, MPhil, MAT, BsCs

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23 thoughts on “Writing Process: 6th Draft Edits Done, Beta Readers and Logo Needed!!

  1. I have started, Shira, read the first two chapters. Can it be that there are more practical examples of the different measures given now? Or do I just not remember from the first reading (wouldn’t surprise me)? I like it actually, makes it really hands on.
    But, should I stop and wait for the final version?

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  2. Five more sets of changes spotted:
    1.) one: many benefits both at the individual switch the words at both
    2.) two: ‘…remaining stages. Too many spaces phase one
    3.) Three: “vast project. Too many spaces Yet it is a project that must be taken…”
    4.). Four: “of of Phase…”
    5.) five : make the second reference to Dr King’s book in the bibliography section 1968 rather than 1967 even though some publishers listed as 67, it was published posthumously in 68.

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        1. Thank you so much!! 🙂
          Much appreciated

          (Though I must protest that my initial words are rarely good -I must do much polishing, in general, before publishing…)


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