– short story of December: encouragement pls?

update during Covid-19: Hubris and Hemlock is now up for beta reviews on Wattpad, and also I think on my GoodReads profile, if you are a member there…

I was amazed by Stephen King’s memoir on writing, but am having trouble taking his advice. It’s not easy, getting into my short story for December while I let my NaNoWriMo2015 practice novel Rough Draft rest for 6 weeks (ala Stephen King: On Writing).

So I hope you all, dear readers, will help hold me to account:  This Week I want to finish planning the 10k words in large: Setting, Conflict(s?), Master Scenes and Protagonist character-building.

1st question:  is a short story long enough to have both external and internal conflict??

2nd q:  do people bother classifying the genre for a short story?

Public Service Announcement (mostly for American citizens of voting age living in the USA at the moment)  from my GoodReads book in (reading) progress:

“Call, write, and visit your government officials and educators and share your insights. Let them know there are better answers. Stand up and tell them it is time to invest in the lives of poor and abandoned children.
Work in your community to reach out and help Invisible Children live among us as productive and healthy citizens.
Visit our website:
http://www.invisiblechildren.org
Use our ongoing web dialogue to post
your interests and findings:
Share …   Most importantly, be active and concerned for the abused and neglected children in your community.”

In Solidarity with All Kind People and PhD ( PhDresearch journal )students who share notes,

(like JrROTC friend Tammy, loyal friend Elaine, loyal activist friend Felice, and an allied Librarian)
Peace via Cooperation and Non-Cooperation,
ShiraDest
3rd of December, 12015 HE

(later addition: )
(this one was published in Concrete Wolf but the magazine is now defunct…)

“Lost in a Rose”

smooth hand touches silk
on the curved red petal
hibiscus scented nectar
within conical perdition


this one got good comments in the poetry workshop, but needs polishing…
…originally written wed. 21 june 2000

A scream shatters the still night
shrill peal, reverberating off the hills
look at me it cries
react
remove this agony
the sword under which I labor
to see and not be heard
warn and watch chaos befall
strike in defense yet named a traitor
ever the thorn in your side
I am the gadfly of Athens,
reborn…
(edited 29 march 2001, but where???)


a favorite horse riding poem I wrote in 2002 has been lost, originally entitled ‘Steed’
later retitled ‘Motorcycle Mare’
sent to two magazines and posted on LJ but all seem lost now… oh well…
-hair flowing in the whipping wind
pressing forward together
flowing ever faster
Read, Write, Dream, Teach !

ShiraDest
8 March, 12016 HE

Your fundamental problem is that you do not really believe that you deserve to have good things happen to you. if you marry when under duress

Publication: “Lost in a Rose”, Concrete Wolf Poetry Quarterly
Issue Number 2

And because abused children become abused adults, it is important to keep writing, especially for ladies in relationships that make you cry,  and to review your journals regularly, so you can then make a plan to get out, however long it may take.  No one who makes you suffer really loves you, no matter what the words say, look to the deeds, and then act accordingly, for all of our sakes.

FinancialAbuse

About ShiraDestProjectDoBetter

Shira Destinie Jones is founder of #ProjectDoBetter, a long term plan proposal for community building, and a published poet, academic author, and advocate for improving our #PublicDomainInfrastructure. Her other book, Stayed on Freedom's Call, on Black-Jewish Cooperation in DC, is freely available via the Internet Archive. She has organized community events such as film discussions, multi-ethnic song events, and cooperative presentations, and is a native of Washington, DC. She promotes peaceful planning, NVC and the Holocene Calendar, and is also a writer. More information at https://shiradest.wordpress.com/

4 thoughts on “– short story of December: encouragement pls?

  1. These are really good! As far as your questions regarding short stories are concerned: I have no idea! Novoed facilitates creative writing courses for free. There’s one on now, but it’s deep into it and it will take a bit of serious work to catch up. I fell behind so far I’m not going to try. July has a course in poetry writing starting, to do with identity and community, ie character in context, including setting. I’m gathering my strength, resting as much as I can while sitting with a disgruntled cat, but signed up. Here’s the link: https://app.novoed.com/fiction-and-nonfiction-2017

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