How (NOT) to Write a Practice Novel, CFoF, Book 1: Beginnings; Draft #5

This is where I stopped for a while, due to life.  I realized also, that it needed a complete overhaul to be marketable, despite being told that it is a worthwhile story, which I appreciate.  It may be readable, but probably not yet publishable.

Draft # 5: Creator Friend or Foe Book 1 BeginningsDrft5

ShiraDestinie

Universal (MEOW Community Cooperation) or Tell Your Story Date: Tuesday, 26 September, 12014 H.E. (Holocene/Human Era)

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One thought on “How (NOT) to Write a Practice Novel, CFoF, Book 1: Beginnings; Draft #5

  1. A friend on draft #5: “Well, the story will never “date”, for one thing–someone can read this and
    > not necessarily know when it was written. they might know it is based on Old
    > Testament if they are familiar, but they do not have to know in order to
    > enjoy the story. Plus there are cool elements in this story that show how
    > religion in many ways is universal and descended from a common source. The
    > multi-armed goddess and the women decorated in henna, the use of the various
    > languages to nod to our ancestry and give an opinion on masculine and
    > feminine language, thought, etc…plus the dialogue is often quite funny,
    > and all of this breathes life into an ancient story.”

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