This is the third draft of what began as my NaNoWriMo 2012 novel “Angels: Friends or Foes?” -which really was 3 or 4 short stories rolled into an episodic novel, as it turns out in hindsight.
I also see alot of anger and questioning, my then-current mental state, which I was pulling out of the book in order to make it more readable for others, and more enjoyable for myself. But I had to work through those emotions before I could even see, let alone edit, their effects on my writing.
Here is Draft #3: Creator Friend or Foe Book 1 Beginnings 3rd Draft
Universal Date (was MEOW Community Cooperation Date): Tuesday, 26 September, 12014 H.E. (Holocene/Human Era)